Update : since my social pools are primarily queer and usually trans, I would appreciate some cis and/or non-queer people who would be kind enough to give me feedback on the story!

Hey hey! The story prototype for my in-dev game "Just Kill The Dog" is available and I would really appreciate some feedback on story structure and such!

It's likely to be a bit rough but that's why I need help finding the parts that I'm way too close to it to notice!

And all advice will help to create the best possible trans allegory psychological thriller game possible!

Play time is estimated like 30 minutes and that's counting time my initial playtesters were asking questions or pausing so I could jot notes down so likely a bit shorter if you're decisive.

It runs on web and should work on mobile as well!

https://queenofsquiggles.itch.io/just-kill-the-dog-story-prototype

Also if you have the time please fill out my feedback form! https://squiggles.pro/nextcloud/apps/forms/s/9QwxFAcje8PYKMJz6LqGsqLK

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